beyond the mask

O_O what a drama, for God's sake !!! it's good one, love it! but it's sad, it really is what was the inspiration from..?

^_^ i'm happy for both of you : ]] you can learn from her somthing, i mean, about could be very interesting.

the poem is really great...although it's sad *hugs* you know that he never could stay for the eternity, and it's meant to be this way... you're only 13, don't take ...

i think you should give it to her...

tnx :D

tnx : ]] well, i'm writnig in hebrew too, but i don't really like it because comparing to my english poems, they are shallow and superficial so hh :D

O_O WOW...just WOW i'm too excited to tell you anything else but WOW !!! it's brilliant, it really is WOW may i ask you what give you the idea and ...

thanks a lot to all of you ^_^ by the way, there can't be any mistakes in grammar for one good reason - my english teacher has cheked it and ...

short and to the point : ] i liked the metaphor of the breeze, it's genius O_O oh, and i like butterflies too, although they're dying too fast...=\ wish you ...

first of all: "it were true." - it was true (?) emm...i didn't really like it, but i didn't hate it neither... i don't know, i truly don't. i think ...

O_O it's interesting... the way you put it all together is reaaaaaaaally beautiful and i liked it. :] but, don't take it personally, it's only an advice, the whole idea ...

i believe that people see what they want to see (and it also includes things that we think, hear etc.) a little bit strange poem, but it has its trick ...

i hate the word "perfect", just hate it... you know, i've learned that bad can be also good, it just depends on the way you look at it... : ]] ...

hi everyone : ] well, this is one of my best songs i've written 'till now. (at least some of the peple think it is :D) i don't know why ...

well, i don't really like loooooooong poems... but it's reaaaaaaally beautiful : ] i think you should make a song of it, with musoc :D it would be great have ...